Ngl this gotta be one of the most mid revenge stories I’ve ever read (if you can even call it that). It’s more so smut + drama. Usually when revenge or justice is included in a story there’s a lot planned, but the situation was resolved so easily and it wasn’t even due to the ML or FL’s idea lmfao. I guess it’s realistic in a way that a person doesn’t get automatically smarter and knows exactly what to plot and do to get revenge, seeing as both ML and FL didn’t grow up with any of that kind of skill.
I hate to admit it I really do- but if the two antagonist characters were not as bad and took out the cheating bit entirely, they could’ve been the better main characters with a villain-like personality, based off cunningness and intelligence alone. I even felt like the author themself liked the antagonists more with how much screentime they got. It is pretty disappointing expecting and hoping for both FL and ML to get smarter and not happen. I wouldn’t recommend reading again or at all if any new readers expect a good revenge story.
Ngl this gotta be one of the most mid revenge stories I’ve ever read (if you can even call it that). It’s more so smut + drama. Usually when revenge or justice is included in a story there’s a lot planned, but the situation was resolved so easily and it wasn’t even due to the ML or FL’s idea lmfao. I guess it’s realistic in a way that a person doesn’t get automatically smarter and knows exactly what to plot and do to get revenge, seeing as both ML and FL didn’t grow up with any of that kind of skill.
I hate to admit it I really do- but if the two antagonist characters were not as bad and took out the cheating bit entirely, they could’ve been the better main characters with a villain-like personality, based off cunningness and intelligence alone. I even felt like the author themself liked the antagonists more with how much screentime they got. It is pretty disappointing expecting and hoping for both FL and ML to get smarter and not happen. I wouldn’t recommend reading again or at all if any new readers expect a good revenge story.