Gtfoutta here w this abomination
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the ending got me sad but its ok bc they r together in the after world now ...
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Wait, so like Nelly got 2 graves?? One for show with her name beside her �...
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XD speedrun 101, but only one memorable and new thing is when she pushed Ar...
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Is it just me or is this a literal porn movie...just drawn? It's not even a PWP kinda story. It's something you'd find on pornhub or faphouse. And we already know the acting is as horrendous as what's written here.
There's an author that actually sat down and wrote this and an editor that read this and said, "YES, let's publish this!" So....are they okay? Anybody checked up on them? Maybe a Wellfare Check or something?
So, he didn't make her an honest woman in the end? Even during that time, it would've been okay for them to wait a couple of years after the husband's death and then get married. Marriage between In-Laws happened all the time, at least to keep the family name.
So, the Author did a cop-out, yeah? They killed the FL at the end. Bc their brain was probably rotten by this point so, they killed her and then him and ended the story.
Did she really say/think this??? "My world is shaking....my lips....my nipples...my clitoris..." Uh, DUH ya ditz. Ya gotta whole ass diamond ring randomly stuck to your clit that apparently vibrates controlled by his ring.
For real tho....how did it stay around her clit?? Again magic? Really wish the Author could've explained that or whatever. The damn thing was just....there....STUCK. Flies don't even stick to shit tighter than that ring stuck to her clit.
Anyway....I had a good laugh tho.