If the comments before me are all right (coz it really is true obviously), then we got a long story ahead of us. Consider the first chapt as the foreshadowing wew.... It kinda bored me now coz the plot is pretty much obvious, the FL is kinda lame and slow-wit,. The ML being overly protective seems to happened so fast and I prefer if he acts more cunning or act accordingly not abruptly.. I think it doesn't suit his appearance when he acts without thinking in some scenes, like misunderstanding the FL with the other guys? I mean shouldn't you investigate first? idk whatever I think I'm gonna shut my brain next time I read the updates
If the comments before me are all right (coz it really is true obviously), then we got a long story ahead of us. Consider the first chapt as the foreshadowing wew.... It kinda bored me now coz the plot is pretty much obvious, the FL is kinda lame and slow-wit,. The ML being overly protective seems to happened so fast and I prefer if he acts more cunning or act accordingly not abruptly.. I think it doesn't suit his appearance when he acts without thinking in some scenes, like misunderstanding the FL with the other guys? I mean shouldn't you investigate first? idk whatever I think I'm gonna shut my brain next time I read the updates