
I agree with your second point, heavy. Dan is a really bland and plain character. Serving as a doormat for loterally everyone. Like no man would act so.. pathetic, So 1 dimensional and pitiful. Its sad considering that things happening to him are real, sa, forcing him to do stuff, debt, poverty but still. Self respect is also a real thing yk... bro has 0 of it ever since the beginning

yeah JK is lwk not a villain but like just extremely dumb. he's like a child in a big body, not knowing what he's doing. Yubaba's son in Spirited Away has evolved past his current stage, and he was a freaking baby
and yeah I get it Dan is depressed but I've been depressed for so many years I don't want to witness someone just being depressed for 67 chs I want some development dawg

i honestly agree. i also read a shit ton of stories with red and black flags and enjoy reading about them. but yeah this is like… a little bland? also idk why but horse face getting irrationally/suddenly angry just… is kind of jarring and unfitting…? idek how to describe it.
anyway i felt the same way about bj alex so
Okay so I’m a lover of red and even black flags but I can’t put JK in neither of those two categories because he is just boring af..
Also I have no idea where all the love for Dan is coming from.. He might be the most boring bottom in popular yaoi. I will root for him once he stands up for himself. And don’t come at me with: he is depressed etc etc. We have seen that in multiple characters already and they atleast have a bit of personality.
This story was already a trainwreck from the beginning but with the plot that’s going nowhere, the lack of chemistry and the one dimensional characters im not even happy anymore when this uploads.
I will keep reading it tho since im petty like that and love a good hate read