A simple smut comic with a bit of a nice story. One could easily make this a longer, more detailed comic tbh, there is plenty potential for that!
It does what it was supposed to but didn't overstay it's welcome at the risk of feeling dragged or not well written. Which I think was a good choice instead of having another 50+ chapter fuckfest around.
Art is quite nice, especially the chibi art is lovely, tho the overall story could definitely have done with some more detail and a few more chapters to make it better. Just so we can get a bit more immersive on the emotions side of things. ML especially would have benefitted from this. Dropping hints like glances and blushing and whatnot before having them bonk. To make us slowly realize something's up. I'd even have welcomed just reading about other characters around them too. Despite me not really liking that usually. XD But the idol x bodyguard setup IS very nice.
Give it a try, it's something simple but still decent I'd say. Nothing deep or grand, but a good read if you want something quick to spend some time on. :)
A simple smut comic with a bit of a nice story.
One could easily make this a longer, more detailed comic tbh, there is plenty potential for that!
It does what it was supposed to but didn't overstay it's welcome at the risk of feeling dragged or not well written. Which I think was a good choice instead of having another 50+ chapter fuckfest around.
Art is quite nice, especially the chibi art is lovely, tho the overall story could definitely have done with some more detail and a few more chapters to make it better. Just so we can get a bit more immersive on the emotions side of things. ML especially would have benefitted from this. Dropping hints like glances and blushing and whatnot before having them bonk. To make us slowly realize something's up.
I'd even have welcomed just reading about other characters around them too. Despite me not really liking that usually. XD But the idol x bodyguard setup IS very nice.
Give it a try, it's something simple but still decent I'd say. Nothing deep or grand, but a good read if you want something quick to spend some time on. :)