REVIEW: Wasted Potential, don't bother reading.

Your sentences become more and more broken, but I'll try to reply regardless. Tho this is the last time.

Fast reading or scrolling through pages quickly is even more proof you cannot judge the writing of a story properly. :')

I keep telling you I have high standards to emphasize the point that i know what good writing looks like, which you actively debate against. All while making it very clear your own standards are very low and you do not pay attention to what actually matters when it comes to good writing.
This is the SIMPLEST I can do to explain this to you. Whether you understand this now or not isn't up to me. Nor do I care.

I don't care one way or another whether you skip things, jump back and forth or whatever. You have made it clear by now you do not know what exactly matters with writing or judging it. Because you factually cannot judge the writing well by jumping around while reading. You need to read the story as it comes, in order, to judge it for what it is.

If you dislike critique, that's a you-problem. Warning other readers is not 'low' or disrespectful, this is what every author is willingly subjecting themselves to when publishing. And writing a critique is not a bad thing. Nor is warning people about a lazy rape-infested story.
Bringing respectfulness into this is nonsensical anyway. We are all reading this on an illegal website, in case you forgot that fact. And authors find THAT much MUUUUCh worse than a critique, mind you. :P

At this point you made it clear you neither understand what i am talking about nor are you aware what critique is or how it works, so this conversation is over.
You do you, but stop trying to argue about things when you actually do not know how to identify wasted potential and know what that means when it comes to stories.

Have a good day and I hope you'll someday develope higher standards for writing instead of white knighting for badly written pieces of fiction.

again with your standards, so low of you for reminding other of that. I neither wanted to criticize you , if you read the first chat I wrote , I wrote what I thought. There no problem with me jumping the story from back and forth, being in a straight line and reading is a straight order is not a rule, that's what you follow . If means your understanding to the topic is slowly if you don't read it step by step.

Neither I want to know your standards, you being disrespectful and being a judge or whatever you said at first but as it goes by you keep on explanating yourself like you're having a passage writing competition. I don't want to understand what you talk about with all the theory you stated, I was only staying in the topic I first replied you to too.

Neither I first told you to stop with your review writing. You make a normal explanation of my side to a hectic chat. Telling me about your high standards, others low standards , their low skills and judging .

And no author like it when someone criticize or give bad review to their work without even reading it fully. If you want to experience it , you ahead and write one yourself. And you don't need to tell other whether they know or not know what to read . I can identify perfectly if this manhwa storyline is good or not.
And I am sure you get misunderstandings a lot , I thought by writing short you can get it but no you don't. When I said I scroll and read it fast , I meant it by the smut part , i am sure you know that. Reading a smut part slowly to get a feel of it while your reading in front of someone ( family members) is not something I can do .

Have a good day too and I hope you'll keep standards naturally and not by telling others.

Yeah, you either don't WANT to understand what I'm writing down or you can't.

At this point everything you say is just a rinse and repeat and I won't waste my breathe trying to explain things to you again. Nor will I do so given all you want to do is make me stop writing reviews because you can't handle critiques about something you like.

Have a good life with this mindset of yours, but it honestly won't do you any good in life. XD

Now this my friends is a bad opinion

Like wow you’re the most rude and arrogant person on mangago congrats!

You base your rating on your own opinions instead of facts and end up leaving nothing but random shitpost that’s really an achievement you can be very embarrassed being you

(Also the fact that two people say the same thing to you says more about you then the story)

Most rude and arrogant? Then you haven't been around in the community for long. XD
And I'd wager I am NOT the rude one here considering I wasn't the one calling others an idiot right off the bat for not liking this comic. But whatever you say. ╮(￣▽￣)╭

None of this was a shitpost. You should look up the definition of that word before using it.

(You DO realize that not everybody bothers reading comments when they don't like something, right?? Besides that, this post has 3 likes and 0 dislikes. So I'm not sure why you're trying to have a gotcha moment. That's kinda weird logic right there.)

Tsk tsk no manners huh?

First you should apologize to Dee and Argue master because they both approached you with polite reasoning and you where the one throwing insults at them

Also this manwha has a 64,7 5 star rating right? And besides I bet a lot of people don’t wanna read shitpost like yours (I’ve seen your account man and you are really pathetic)

And besides that three people call you out for your bad reasoning says more about you then the manwha now doesn’t it?

No manners? Because I don't just shut up and bow down to your nonsesical comments? XD

You clearly haven't read this thread then, because the first insult came precisely from AM.
If you want to make up delusional lies, at least try to make them not immediately refutable by going to the 4th comment of this thread. XD
At this point you already lost all credibility you could have had.

Again, don't use words you don't know the meaning of. There is online dictionaries you can use. For free too.

It doesn't. Not sure how you think people so far equally agreeing AND disagreeing somehow magically makes the disagreeing side stronger. Do you know how this works?? If not, maybe don't bring it up and try yet again to make it a gotcha moment.
Nobody 'called me out' for anything here btw. Again, i think you don't understand what the phrase 'calling out someone' means. So you shouldn't use it.

So far I have been the only polite one in this thread, considering i didn't call others an idiot for not liking their thoughts and comments or for not bending.
I gave everybody a chance to calm their tiddies, they got more prissy and insulted first. I owe noone here an apology for them being the first ones to throw dirt. That's some weird logic you got there again. (〜￣△￣)〜


You're also someone that's just up their own and cannot hold an adult conversation. So I'm putting you in time-out, Karen. You can call the manager if you want, but I got better things to do that waste my time with a 3rd child not making sense or listens to a convo they started.
Have a good day, but maybe stop getting all prissy in peoples faces and pretending you have gotcha moments when that is very blatantly not the case. :P

Nice new smurf account btw.
How very adult, not pathetic and non-shitposterish of you. :)

Is it really that bad? because does the ml rape the mc? If there’s a lot of that then I’d rather not read it then

Sadly yes, in chapter 4 he just shoves the boy down and his dick into him, even drawing blood and just continuing as he likes. I can usually stomach rape-stories, but not if THIS is what happens. Just just disgusting and not something the author can ever redeem, given it shows the ML is just vile-natured per default and malicious just for his own entertainment. Even in bed apparently.

Doesn't exactly get better after that and I for one am not someone that hopes for things to turn better after 70-something chapters or so.
It's unpleasant from the get-go and anyone who can't stand that sort of thing should likely stay clear from this.

Rape in general for me isn’t redeeming I try to avoid stories that contain rape from the ml because I can’t see them the same no matter how much of a good character development they get. But thank you for telling me lol I’ll avoid this story

Totally understandable. There have hardly ever been plots that manage to make it redeemable really. So I totally understand not wanting to bother with it.

Hope you find something good to read elsewhere tho. lately I'm looking at shounen-ai again, since there is no sexual scenes there anyway, avoiding rape is much easier in that genre. :')

“There is no such thing as a bad writer” is SUCH AN INSANE TAKE????? There are so many bad writers tf

That could be a personal take a story that you find bad, another person might like it and consider them a good writer.