My only critique

Wolves March 24, 2025 8:31 pm

I love the plot and how Taker and Sooho's relationship becomes in the end. (The ending was so beautiful but painful ) The only thing that rlly bothered me was the pacing. The later half of the story improved on the pacing and timin of events, but the beginning felt rushed and compacted. A lot of things happened off screen and I feel like Taker and Sooho got together so abruptly.

I wish we could've seen Sooho and Taker interact more as roommates(?) or Sooho feeling indebted to Taker, then going into the romance. I feel like the creator just rlly wanted them to be a couple already and kinda rushed them being into a relationship imo. But nonetheless, they are a beautiful couple

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