Another short story I fell in love with. I literally cried in the painful scenes and I really rooted for the Seme to leave. I was really disappointed that he forgave the bratty Uke. They were still too immature to understand how important they are to each other so I had hoped they'd break up and then reunite for, IDK, more than a year later? Anyway, I really felt he forgave him too fast.
But then the Uke is not like other toxic people. He actually repented and made sure he changed. And as they say, "love is lovelier the second time around", I think this phrase definitely applies here.
AND I FELL IN LOVE WITH THEM.
It's the best decision for the author to make this longer than they initially planned. It's still short for me but I think that made it wholesome. I'm hoping for another masterpiece! You don't need to surprise me because I know you'll do just as great!
Why are the shortest stories the best ones
Another short story I fell in love with. I literally cried in the painful scenes and I really rooted for the Seme to leave. I was really disappointed that he forgave the bratty Uke. They were still too immature to understand how important they are to each other so I had hoped they'd break up and then reunite for, IDK, more than a year later?
Anyway, I really felt he forgave him too fast.
But then the Uke is not like other toxic people. He actually repented and made sure he changed. And as they say, "love is lovelier the second time around", I think this phrase definitely applies here.
AND I FELL IN LOVE WITH THEM.
It's the best decision for the author to make this longer than they initially planned. It's still short for me but I think that made it wholesome. I'm hoping for another masterpiece! You don't need to surprise me because I know you'll do just as great!