1. lol the misunderstanding clear up "im not gay" "we're not gay" "pls im not gay" lol 2. the pen brrooo 3. the story flow is kind of weird, like instead of learniing about things happening in the chara life we are thrusting into the middle of it, so the plot is already happening but we dont see the start of it yk. 4. also scene changes are akward but maybe it bc its both point of views so the rhythm is messing? 5. the kiss was good 6. lol someone commented that one of the plot lines should be lung cancer, and they are so right like they are always smoking - the ashtry full after only 2 hrs is he eating them?! - also all the smoking is taking me out of it bc the characters must smell so strong 7.ok hes like i can fanastize morally now but hes also like this would never happen as if zeo is not begging him for it 8. it feels like the author doesnt want to get them together so early but then makes both of them have clearish feelings. they made rawon have feeling or this sexual stuff would be weird, but for the director they just needed to give him a reason to go after rawon but now that rawon has feeling he says stuff if onesided crush and wanting to kiss its like the director was pursuing rawon first so like? 9. every time i read TF i read the fuck 10. brub ppl are dyingggg - lowkey mad that the dude died bc it didnt do much besides make a point that the chairmain was cruel and so is the girl for using the lil bro. i feel like he could have lived and this point could still have been made yk 11. i understand lil bro he doesnt want his brother to die and if my family ever saves my life with no work plus free vaca hell yes
1. lol the misunderstanding clear up "im not gay" "we're not gay" "pls im not gay" lol
2. the pen brrooo
3. the story flow is kind of weird, like instead of learniing about things happening in the chara life we are thrusting into the middle of it, so the plot is already happening but we dont see the start of it yk.
4. also scene changes are akward but maybe it bc its both point of views so the rhythm is messing?
5. the kiss was good
6. lol someone commented that one of the plot lines should be lung cancer, and they are so right like they are always smoking
- the ashtry full after only 2 hrs is he eating them?!
- also all the smoking is taking me out of it bc the characters must smell so strong
7.ok hes like i can fanastize morally now but hes also like this would never happen as if zeo is not begging him for it
8. it feels like the author doesnt want to get them together so early but then makes both of them have clearish feelings. they made rawon have feeling or this sexual stuff would be weird, but for the director they just needed to give him a reason to go after rawon but now that rawon has feeling he says stuff if onesided crush and wanting to kiss its like the director was pursuing rawon first so like?
9. every time i read TF i read the fuck
10. brub ppl are dyingggg
- lowkey mad that the dude died bc it didnt do much besides make a point that the chairmain was cruel and so is the girl for using the lil bro. i feel like he could have lived and this point could still have been made yk
11. i understand lil bro he doesnt want his brother to die and if my family ever saves my life with no work plus free vaca hell yes