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and she keeps trying to keep readers hooked with sex scenes as if we actually want to see sex that started with dan offering himself in the saddest, most desperate way possible. fck off
YES, one hundred percent agree, her story is 100% written in a manner that allows it to drag on for stupidly long so she can just keep us hooked for longer, if she rly wants to do that she's recently heavily failed w the backwards development and that awful sex scene that j made me feel twisted and awful for dan
atp i have no idea what the fck the plan for this story even is. it makes no sense for jerkyung to have heard everything he did from dan, dan’s grandma, the villagers, and STILL be saying shit like, “you’re useless to me like this.” like wtf, is there nothing that can make this fcking bastard change his mind? not even almost losing dan, literally watching him try to kill himself, gave him a reality check ;-;
it’s not even about the story being toxic anymore, it’s about this mf author trying to start a redemption arc with dan leaving and setting boundaries, only to throw it all away because she’s incapable of actually developing her characters. she’s just wasting her gorgeous art on a story that fcking refuses to evolve