Can we stop doing this?

ReviewRaptor March 23, 2025 9:55 pm

The writing of this is just nonsensical.
If this marriage was arranged to create piece between two nations (kudos btw for using actual german names instead of gibberish), then they should treat her with care instead of treating her like a pile of shit.
She CAN send word to her nation and shit will hit the fan. And since this was done by the big boss's orders, you would actively defy his wishes. Hence your asses would get hanged immediately. Or similar things.

I get why authors do this stuff all the time, it's low hanging fruit for writing, but at leats TRY to think of how the setting you are using actually, realistically works. Because this wouldn't make sense to do irl unless you want to try and see if isekai-ing is actually real.


I'll read a bit more but neither the art nor story so far are good. So this better have something of interest waiting for me. :/

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