i can't say it was unreadable, but the complete tone changes between horrifically brutal and violent rape scenes, and then regular relationship drama, was extremely bad. i could've praised the story if it was constantly violent for at least being realistic (minho's reactions to all of this were extremely realistic imo. especially the whole "if i go along with it he wont hurt me.... wait wtf am i thinking???" thing), but it was shockingly inconsistent. like, either don't make the rape scenes this realistic, or cut out trying to be a regular romance drama. you can't have both ...
anyway minho becoming a suicidal alcoholic was so real. hope he ends up killing the other guy. i never liked the original story enough to remember what he's done, so the whole "you don't get it he deserves it!!!" argument I've seen is insane to me. he literally regrets everything he's done and based on clues from the notes he already got his karma. anyway minho deserved better!!! i would treat him right!!!!!
best part were the notes honestly. i usually hate editor/uploader commentary, but i loved seeing an actual sane commentary on all this ty for making it bearable!!
i can't say it was unreadable, but the complete tone changes between horrifically brutal and violent rape scenes, and then regular relationship drama, was extremely bad. i could've praised the story if it was constantly violent for at least being realistic (minho's reactions to all of this were extremely realistic imo. especially the whole "if i go along with it he wont hurt me.... wait wtf am i thinking???" thing), but it was shockingly inconsistent. like, either don't make the rape scenes this realistic, or cut out trying to be a regular romance drama. you can't have both ...
anyway minho becoming a suicidal alcoholic was so real. hope he ends up killing the other guy. i never liked the original story enough to remember what he's done, so the whole "you don't get it he deserves it!!!" argument I've seen is insane to me. he literally regrets everything he's done and based on clues from the notes he already got his karma.
anyway minho deserved better!!! i would treat him right!!!!!
best part were the notes honestly. i usually hate editor/uploader commentary, but i loved seeing an actual sane commentary on all this ty for making it bearable!!