GIVE ME CHARACTER AND PLOT AND STORY I BEG

Loki March 23, 2025 3:42 am

Girl idk, fl and ml don't have character at all. Cheater has way more character and the backstory helped too. Also, i rly don't see where the story is going?? Every chapter feels like a filler

Responses
    Erisu March 23, 2025 5:59 am

    Prob cuz it’s a slow burn type of story hopefully it gets good soon

    Loki March 23, 2025 4:10 pm
    Prob cuz it’s a slow burn type of story hopefully it gets good soon Erisu

    HOPEFULLYYY

    Loki March 23, 2025 7:19 pm

    WTH i rmbr typing 2 paragraphs BUT IM JUST REALIZING ONLY THE FIRST ONE IS HERE?? AND IT'S CUT OFF TOO

    Loki March 23, 2025 7:32 pm

    So continuing my yap LOL

    Usually you'd see something has changed by the end of a chapter, that there's development, but as i said the chapters look like fillers..

    Ifl fl and ml keep going back and forth there's insecurities and secrets AND THERE'S ALREADY MISCOMMUNICATION girlie thought guy only wanted to sleep with her oh but we actually dk for sure if taeha really has romantic feelings for haesoo cuz it hasn't been explicitly mentioned or given enough uhm hints?? Tho it does seem that way (that he likes her), or at least we hope it's true so we see it that way..

    (I think i missed a lot of points cuz i dont rmbr them any longer but here's what i got for yall to simmer and ruminate in ur minds)

    Erisu March 24, 2025 3:28 am
    So continuing my yap LOLUsually you'd see something has changed by the end of a chapter, that there's development, but as i said the chapters look like fillers..Ifl fl and ml keep going back and forth there's ... Loki

    Their relationship right now is kinda confusing