Realistically, Dan should be in a medical emergency (because he drank alcohol with insomnia meds) next chapter and hopefully that event will significantly move the plot forward. I know Mingwa (author) said she personally likes "toxic top build up" and she also said "The slower the burn, the sweeter the redemption." But this is just too much. I wish she has an editor or something that can advise her.
Realistically, Dan should be in a medical emergency (because he drank alcohol with insomnia meds) next chapter and hopefully that event will significantly move the plot forward. I know Mingwa (author) said she personally likes "toxic top build up" and she also said "The slower the burn, the sweeter the redemption." But this is just too much. I wish she has an editor or something that can advise her.