Okay, at this point in the story I have no idea where the plot needs to go in order for it...

Zuros March 23, 2025 1:23 am

Okay, at this point in the story I have no idea where the plot needs to go in order for it to end with a believable happy ending. I feel like no matter how the story tries to turn into a happy ending, I won't believe it.

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    MilkyKosmos March 23, 2025 1:25 am

    Literally every time i start thinking “jaekyung HAS to have had some sort of character development by now right?” He just keeps getting worse

    eremia March 23, 2025 1:26 am

    I mean, for me ML was beyond redemption from the get go. Very poorly written character, there is no place to turn it, so it's natural.

    Zuros March 23, 2025 1:39 am
    I mean, for me ML was beyond redemption from the get go. Very poorly written character, there is no place to turn it, so it's natural. eremia

    I'm just stumped by the idea that according to the laws of yaoi - they will be together, and considering the author and the general theme of the story - it will be a happy ending. And my brain rebels.

    Zuros March 23, 2025 1:40 am
    Literally every time i start thinking “jaekyung HAS to have had some sort of character development by now right?” He just keeps getting worse MilkyKosmos

    Ikr. This is so frustrating...

    eremia March 23, 2025 1:46 am
    I'm just stumped by the idea that according to the laws of yaoi - they will be together, and considering the author and the general theme of the story - it will be a happy ending. And my brain rebels. Zuros

    And that's exactly the problem. Everyone knows how it should end, but the story itself shows the opposite. No passion, no friendship, no care for each other, no love. I'm okay with the ending where MC leaves ML and goes his way, that would be natural in this case. But it's frustrating cuz everyone know it's just a poorly written story

    Zuros March 23, 2025 1:50 am
    And that's exactly the problem. Everyone knows how it should end, but the story itself shows the opposite. No passion, no friendship, no care for each other, no love. I'm okay with the ending where MC leaves ML... eremia

    Yes. And here's the most offensive thing, that at the moment Doc Dan's behavior is very well written from a psychological point of view. And reading the story as a whole is like eating some food and half of it is tasty, and the other half is inedible crap. It causes confusion and irritation.

    Kai March 23, 2025 1:53 am

    This is my assumption rn. We all know that jjk fell in love with Dan. Dan will continue to offer himself to the point that jjk realized what he had done. Once he realize this and his feelings, how can he get Dan to stop reducing himself to a sex object? He wants to see Dan smile, laugh, and act his genuine self. He will agonize that he will never be able to see that ever again. Jjk will attempt to keep him close but I believe jjk will really fall into a deep pit of agony when Dan attempt to end his life. I'm assuming that Dan might lead to suicide but it might not happen. But rn, his only attachment to life is his grandma, which ain't looking pretty rn. I'm irritated asf that Dan is doing this, but at least he grew one bone in his back.... just one.

    eremia March 23, 2025 1:32 pm
    Yes. And here's the most offensive thing, that at the moment Doc Dan's behavior is very well written from a psychological point of view. And reading the story as a whole is like eating some food and half of it ... Zuros

    Totally agree. I really don't know what ML is doing in this story. Even his face is annoying, one-face-man. The author will try to convince us that he had a difficult childhood.. what a bullshit, as if MC haven't

    eremia March 23, 2025 1:41 pm
    This is my assumption rn. We all know that jjk fell in love with Dan. Dan will continue to offer himself to the point that jjk realized what he had done. Once he realize this and his feelings, how can he get Da... Kai

    I don't think the suicide will happen, we kind of had an assumption of it when ML appeared near him. And my problem with ML is that his is a one-emotion guy, always angry, no deeper feelings, no really internal turmoils. He doesn't look like someone capable of caring. He's not even a sociopath, he's just poorly written. But i'm actually interested how the author is going to make him realized all the thing you mentioned, because they kinda need to happen according to the yaoi rules. I personally don't believe it will be done well, in a way that makes sense, but I hope they will convince me :)

    Kai March 23, 2025 7:38 pm
    I don't think the suicide will happen, we kind of had an assumption of it when ML appeared near him. And my problem with ML is that his is a one-emotion guy, always angry, no deeper feelings, no really internal... eremia

    The author better do well! Imma lose my shit! Lolol. We need to see that spiral into deep despair and agony!!!