Liked it overall!

BlueMango March 22, 2025 7:35 pm

really liked the story but I definitely think there should have been at least one more chapter before the last one to show us Carson actually using the stone, why the girls also came to the real world but didn’t remember the mc (unless they just happen to be doppelgängers), and how the prince navigated things after his evil bro died and having the person he loved disappear all at the same time [ I feel sorry for him :( ]

I also think the author should have made a couple more scenes of mc with Carson, and mc having a convo with the prince before the climax to make things a little more clear on who he actually liked. Like I could tell mc was leaning more towards Carson since they had more private interactions later on but that could have been clarified better. ( ̄∇ ̄")

Hope to see side stories in the future tho and maybe have some of these questions and scenes revealed!

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