The premise was really good but the characters are kinda under developed. Everyone feels l...

Mika March 22, 2025 9:02 am

The premise was really good but the characters are kinda under developed. Everyone feels like a children's cartoon character like no real motives for their actions and they're not fully fleshed out so halfway through you get bored of them. The villain is stupid mc is too naive and he's accidentally valuable? Ml is a doormat in my opinion and for a supposedly intelligent capable pirate he's too trusting and he folds very easily idk
But it was cute nonetheless and the art is phenomenal so overall not a bad read

Responses
    Lilmushroom March 23, 2025 3:48 pm

    Is there grape from the ML???

    Mika March 24, 2025 11:47 am
    Is there grape from the ML??? Lilmushroom

    Well kinda? I would categorize it more as dub con (dubious consent) because considering the circumstances mc is consenting to things happening but on the inside he is scared for his life so is it consent? Not really? But is it grape? Also not really
    At the start though ml is very rough so if you're sensitive to this topic i recommend skipping the scenes but to me it wasn't that bad

    Lilmushroom March 24, 2025 12:10 pm
    Well kinda? I would categorize it more as dub con (dubious consent) because considering the circumstances mc is consenting to things happening but on the inside he is scared for his life so is it consent? Not r... Mika

    I'm reading it. Ig it's fine for now as long as the ML is good at the end.