Responses
I think in a few places, Sumiyoshi ended up taking the blame when in reality, if Shinomoto had just been a little more forthcoming about his feelings and what's wrong with him, Sumiyoshi might have figured things out sooner. (I know, plot points, but still...) I DO like how in the later chapters, Sumiyoshi wouldn't let Shinomoto keep quiet and started pinning him down to talk. Like, he's saying he KNOWS something's wrong, so spill. lol
4/5 only because Shinomoto never truly vented his feelings or thoughts to Sumiyoshi. I mean I know you hate being selfish and is shy but allowing yourself to be unhappy because of jealousy is eye roll worthy. Plus even after being together for years, why was he still so hesitant to tell his lover about his feelings...my god. But besides that I loved this story--super adorable.