4/5 only because Shinomoto never truly vented his feelings or thoughts to Sumiyoshi. I mea...

YaoiLover May 23, 2017 5:13 am

4/5 only because Shinomoto never truly vented his feelings or thoughts to Sumiyoshi. I mean I know you hate being selfish and is shy but allowing yourself to be unhappy because of jealousy is eye roll worthy. Plus even after being together for years, why was he still so hesitant to tell his lover about his feelings...my god. But besides that I loved this story--super adorable.

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    Mama Fujoshi November 30, 2017 7:38 am

    I think in a few places, Sumiyoshi ended up taking the blame when in reality, if Shinomoto had just been a little more forthcoming about his feelings and what's wrong with him, Sumiyoshi might have figured things out sooner. (I know, plot points, but still...) I DO like how in the later chapters, Sumiyoshi wouldn't let Shinomoto keep quiet and started pinning him down to talk. Like, he's saying he KNOWS something's wrong, so spill. lol

    YaoiLover December 1, 2017 6:00 am
    I think in a few places, Sumiyoshi ended up taking the blame when in reality, if Shinomoto had just been a little more forthcoming about his feelings and what's wrong with him, Sumiyoshi might have figured thin... Mama Fujoshi

    I agree! He was like speak your mind MALE lol (≧∀≦) it's hard and I get that but it's harder when your partner always hesitates. It could be frustrating for not only you but your partner themselves. But lets not get too deep about a YAOI lol