I like the story overall, but find myself frustrated at times when she's super childish-like not wanting to drink medicine. I think it's because the reader knows that she's 15, but acts 5. I know it's important that MC is a child and plays a role in everyone meeting one another, but I actually wish she never regressed instead, so the idea of her being baby-ish made more sense and was more tolerable. The plot would still make sense if she was a regular savvy kid imo.
I like the story overall, but find myself frustrated at times when she's super childish-like not wanting to drink medicine. I think it's because the reader knows that she's 15, but acts 5.
I know it's important that MC is a child and plays a role in everyone meeting one another, but
I actually wish she never regressed instead, so the idea of her being baby-ish made more sense and was more tolerable. The plot would still make sense if she was a regular savvy kid imo.