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The devil's spawn March 21, 2025 6:57 pm

I like the story but it's a bit off putting for me at the same time. I don't like that the child Damien is already the ml and we can tell so early on. It feels like the fl is just treating the ml as a sibling and I would have preferred if it could have gone in that approach.

I'm only in the early chapters but it just clicked for me when the scene with the orange haired kid wanting to sit next to fl at the orphanage and Damien just starts glaring and being aggressive? The portray of kids/ boys liking people when they're young, means they hate seeing they be nice to other guys

I dislike it but at the same time it is similar to other stories so I don't hate it.

These stories usually start of with meeting at childhood and the main character being an adult in the past, but this one in particular, the fact that she's an adult is really nagging at me when I'm trying to read it. Cause she's treating all the kids like kids.

The fact he (ml) seems to like her is also so quick to develop that it feels like it's pushing it along too quick. Also the duke saying that he'd adopted the fl as a daughter in law felt very strange, though I'd only seen that part elsewhere, I'm not up to that part yet.

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    The devil's spawn March 21, 2025 7:04 pm

    No hate to the story, this is a common trope in mangas. I usually read them just fine so just wanted to share my current opinion from the first few chapters.

    I may change my mind or feel fine with it as I progress?