Hell no, it just ended like that? Are we seriously deadass about this? I can tell the auth...

Sakuraba Laura March 21, 2025 5:26 am

Hell no, it just ended like that? Are we seriously deadass about this? I can tell the author lost all will to continue this story and just went SPLAT and BOOM—a predictable ending.

Also, the "Look at me, Carsen" scene made me cringe so hard (WHAT WAS THE AUTHOR THINKING HERE???). And then that predictable ending—WHERE DID THE AUTHOR'S BRAIN GO?! It could've had a dramatic buildup, but the author said, nah.

Overall, the beginning of the story was fire, but I suppose the author could have expanded on it properly. I've been reading this since its release, yet I didn't see an ounce of romance between Carsen and Maythan—for Maythan to suddenly say, "I wish I could've said I love you." GIRL, WHERE?!

Anyway, the beginning was good, the ending was an abrupt mess. \(^o^)/

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