I want to keep reading but…

BananaSlayer March 20, 2025 11:48 am

I’m so confused with the setting of the story’s the first chapter it’s all over the place. Does it get better?

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    Peerless Papaya March 24, 2025 4:56 pm

    Try the second version of the first chapter. The story gets more clear, the art gets a bit worse over time.