Yes, it is as bad as the comments say. Seriously, if you're thinking about reading this, reconsider. I don't usually say this about free shit, but it sucked.
Fckin spoilers as if it really matters
MCs personality is all over the place. One scene he's a total doormat and then the next scene he acts as if he hasn't been trapped in a modern day slavery situation for the last 10 years being regularly beaten. And beaten before that and treated like dirt by his mom. He mouths off to any and everyone who is apparently above him on this fucked up food chain. He has no self-preservation skills. His doctor tells him having sex with an alpha will kill him. So he goes and has sex with a royal alpha without fighting like his life depends on it. (Did I mention that his life does, in fact, depend on it, according to a medical professional?) But don't worry, plot armor has never worked so hard to keep a moron alive. He survives the should-be fatal sex. ALL OF IT. And there is plenty of it. He just can't resist this alpha's super tasty body odor or something. But apparently he was a near 30 year old virgin or something, so he isn't allowed to understand what a normal healthy relationship might look like because he probably also isn't capable of using his smartphone or a TV or anything else that might give him some insight into how the world works.
You think that would be the fuckiest shit that's going on, but no. Alpha Biggy is also considering marrying MCs abusive shitty royal omega brother because 'its big business, baby'.
And now Cabela's Big Game Hunter Alpha is trying to knock up our previously unknock-up-able MC. Did I forget to mention this alpha has a super raging boner for hunting? Surprise surprise.
Anyways, Sir Hunts-A-Lot wants to marry shitty brother for the cash money and then baby trap MC because of obsession.
So yeah this was the longest comment I ever wrote. Can't believe it was on such a craptastic story as this. But hey it's 1AM. Idc anymore.
Yes, it is as bad as the comments say. Seriously, if you're thinking about reading this, reconsider. I don't usually say this about free shit, but it sucked.
Fckin spoilers as if it really matters
MCs personality is all over the place.
One scene he's a total doormat and then the next scene he acts as if he hasn't been trapped in a modern day slavery situation for the last 10 years being regularly beaten. And beaten before that and treated like dirt by his mom.
He mouths off to any and everyone who is apparently above him on this fucked up food chain.
He has no self-preservation skills.
His doctor tells him having sex with an alpha will kill him.
So he goes and has sex with a royal alpha without fighting like his life depends on it. (Did I mention that his life does, in fact, depend on it, according to a medical professional?)
But don't worry, plot armor has never worked so hard to keep a moron alive.
He survives the should-be fatal sex. ALL OF IT. And there is plenty of it.
He just can't resist this alpha's super tasty body odor or something.
But apparently he was a near 30 year old virgin or something, so he isn't allowed to understand what a normal healthy relationship might look like because he probably also isn't capable of using his smartphone or a TV or anything else that might give him some insight into how the world works.
You think that would be the fuckiest shit that's going on, but no. Alpha Biggy is also considering marrying MCs abusive shitty royal omega brother because 'its big business, baby'.
And now Cabela's Big Game Hunter Alpha is trying to knock up our previously unknock-up-able MC.
Did I forget to mention this alpha has a super raging boner for hunting? Surprise surprise.
Anyways, Sir Hunts-A-Lot wants to marry shitty brother for the cash money and then baby trap MC because of obsession.
So yeah this was the longest comment I ever wrote. Can't believe it was on such a craptastic story as this. But hey it's 1AM. Idc anymore.
See y'all back at Our Sunny Days. ╮(￣▽￣)╭