First of all...why couldnt she be at most 20. Its so weird shes crushing on kids a decade younger. Like she dont even act her age either, shes so naive and rlly easy to manipulate lol. Tbh her mental age is probably like them. Im glad she acknowledges the mental age gap but shes red af every panel like, you a p3do?
Also i feel like theres no development with her and lapis trust wise. Theyre still in the same spot as when they met even though mc got the gist of it. We 22 chapters in and theres more development emotional wise between mc and ogmc than her with the fl.
In fact we barely know shit abt the fl. All we know is her sissy got killed by anti nobles so she getting revenge. We dk why she gave up so easily and died in the og timeline. Or her real character outside of being emo abt wearing a mask like girl. "She doesnt know thw real me" WELL DAMN GIRL NEITHER DO WE. This mysterious shit can only continue for so long.
Literally theres nothing to look forward to. Like a kiss scene with a 16 and 25 yr old? Yuck. Mc interfering with FL's plans? Predictable. Shes such a Mary sue omg. She got capitalism in the brain and hippie for a heart. Ive never seen a 2nd love interest interfere sm like put her aside for more than 1 chapter holy shit.
Thats all thx ^_^
Fyi half these things can be developed later on in the story, js hope its sooner rather than later.
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First of all...why couldnt she be at most 20. Its so weird shes crushing on kids a decade younger. Like she dont even act her age either, shes so naive and rlly easy to manipulate lol. Tbh her mental age is probably like them. Im glad she acknowledges the mental age gap but shes red af every panel like, you a p3do?
Also i feel like theres no development with her and lapis trust wise. Theyre still in the same spot as when they met even though mc got the gist of it. We 22 chapters in and theres more development emotional wise between mc and ogmc than her with the fl.
In fact we barely know shit abt the fl. All we know is her sissy got killed by anti nobles so she getting revenge. We dk why she gave up so easily and died in the og timeline. Or her real character outside of being emo abt wearing a mask like girl. "She doesnt know thw real me" WELL DAMN GIRL NEITHER DO WE. This mysterious shit can only continue for so long.
Literally theres nothing to look forward to. Like a kiss scene with a 16 and 25 yr old? Yuck. Mc interfering with FL's plans? Predictable. Shes such a Mary sue omg. She got capitalism in the brain and hippie for a heart. Ive never seen a 2nd love interest interfere sm like put her aside for more than 1 chapter holy shit.
Thats all thx ^_^
Fyi half these things can be developed later on in the story, js hope its sooner rather than later.