Amazing story but ending felt quick after everything.

Unkown_XXY March 19, 2025 11:10 pm

WHHHHAAAAT it ends like that???? Like it's not bad but it was just abrupt
Like he found out he's got a split personality and I thought it be a few chapters and then it ends

Not a time jump then re meets them and walks away happy.

This be my personal opinion...

I really dislike when artists/writers do time jumps towards the end so they can speed run to the finish line.
I feel Time jumps should only really be used in the beginning and or middle to broadly expand the story.

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