I agree with a lotta you. The plot (plotwhatplot) was rushed but I meant.....for a short story like this? Fine. It is what it is. Besides, sometimes I do like quickies. Especially when they're fluffy and sexy like this one. I do have to say that this last chapter? Is the reason why there are times where I wish I could press a Play Button and watch the scene unfold ................*ahem*.............................Yep. As in I wanna watch them bang. ANYWAY. It was a nice reason. Not great. Not bad, either. Just nice.
I agree with a lotta you. The plot (plotwhatplot) was rushed but I meant.....for a short story like this? Fine. It is what it is. Besides, sometimes I do like quickies. Especially when they're fluffy and sexy like this one. I do have to say that this last chapter? Is the reason why there are times where I wish I could press a Play Button and watch the scene unfold ................*ahem*.............................Yep. As in I wanna watch them bang. ANYWAY. It was a nice reason. Not great. Not bad, either. Just nice.