Okay, a few things, one: the way the page is set up makes it difficult to read. It flows weird. Two: we get that jack grins and likes battle, but beyond that we know nothing of his personality since these are his only two defining features. All we ever see of him is that he battles and smiles. That's it. We neve really see him outside of battle. The story rarely takes a brake. We need a bit of non-action to breathe. We get a little bit of this, but that's it. Lastly: the art just makes me want ro read Hellsing. The lady with glasses looks so much like the woman from Hellsing that i might as well just read that. Alucard is a better grinning slaughterer than Jack Frost.
Okay, a few things, one: the way the page is set up makes it difficult to read. It flows weird. Two: we get that jack grins and likes battle, but beyond that we know nothing of his personality since these are his only two defining features. All we ever see of him is that he battles and smiles. That's it. We neve really see him outside of battle. The story rarely takes a brake. We need a bit of non-action to breathe. We get a little bit of this, but that's it. Lastly: the art just makes me want ro read Hellsing. The lady with glasses looks so much like the woman from Hellsing that i might as well just read that. Alucard is a better grinning slaughterer than Jack Frost.