One note I have is I really think it would've been so much more impactful if, in the last chapter when geom passed him in the street, he didn't turn back. I feel like after the moment on the beach, with the talks of his eyesight deteriorating and his synesthesia and how geom is now too bright to look at, he didn't recognize him. I feel like he wouldn't have turned back bc now that geom is just another "boring, happy person" he'd blend in with everyone else and he wouldn't have noticed him. It would've hit harder that geom is now a new person and has fully left his past behind ugh. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
One note I have is I really think it would've been so much more impactful if, in the last chapter when geom passed him in the street, he didn't turn back. I feel like after the moment on the beach, with the talks of his eyesight deteriorating and his synesthesia and how geom is now too bright to look at, he didn't recognize him. I feel like he wouldn't have turned back bc now that geom is just another "boring, happy person" he'd blend in with everyone else and he wouldn't have noticed him. It would've hit harder that geom is now a new person and has fully left his past behind ugh. ╮(￣▽￣)╭