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i lowkey agree (even if i like this). like we've gotten all of the info we needed from the prologue theres no need to stretch it out this much
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i lowkey agree (even if i like this). like we've gotten all of the info we needed from the prologue theres no need to stretch it out this much
It's already 15 chapter and there is barely any character development and story, even if this a slow pace story but holy, the whole sequence is just about the bright hair guy keep being a coward, indecisive, fickle the entire time. While the dark haired guy is just "agree to disagree later" and make the story/conflict back to the start again. It feel like it keep looping.
Every conversation even feel like just a filler after filler to make it longer, so many conversations just like unnecessary, without leading it to anywhere.