I think this unfortunately fell into a lot of the same pitfalls that Sign did. While its nice that this one has a better plot, whenever it really starts to get moving it just feels like the author includes put in sex for no reason (maybe to extend the chapter count?). Also in general, I can't feel much of a chemistry between mc and ml. They're funny to watch sometimes (ie, the amusement park date) but most of the time I don't sense any hint of tension between them. Side note: I know other people complained about it and its not that big of a deal but the mc seriously looks like a kid, same as in Sign. This wouldn't be THAT big of a deal but everyone else in the story constantly calls him a child and infantilizes him. Its just kind of weird ATP because, brother, QUIT CALLING HIM CHILD WHILE UR FUCKING HIM.
I think this unfortunately fell into a lot of the same pitfalls that Sign did. While its nice that this one has a better plot, whenever it really starts to get moving it just feels like the author includes put in sex for no reason (maybe to extend the chapter count?). Also in general, I can't feel much of a chemistry between mc and ml. They're funny to watch sometimes (ie, the amusement park date) but most of the time I don't sense any hint of tension between them. Side note: I know other people complained about it and its not that big of a deal but the mc seriously looks like a kid, same as in Sign. This wouldn't be THAT big of a deal but everyone else in the story constantly calls him a child and infantilizes him. Its just kind of weird ATP because, brother, QUIT CALLING HIM CHILD WHILE UR FUCKING HIM.