Rant: Idiotic writing and blame games

ReviewRaptor March 17, 2025 2:34 am

The writing irks me.
They said the dragons can only concieve with true love, yet then they say that society for dragons is utterly sexist and kids naturally don't need to give a shit about their fathers.
None of that adds up when it comes to world building. It's stupid, if anything.
Not sure if this is a translation mishap, but as it reads here it's really idiotic to throw these two things into the same world. Or at least the same dragon clan. If it was a different clan then it could be made to make sense, but not like this.

People gotta stop blaming the father when all of what is currently happening is entirely the mothers fault. And for absolutely ZERO good reason as well.
She's a hundred times worse than the father.

The father's behavior is at least understandable considering he has no emotions and acts accordingly AND views her as a threat because people have sent kids to make use of him or hurt him before. The mother's actions have no excuse. No good, sensical ones anyway. Dooming her child to be raised by racist bitches who treat her worse than a stray dog, ensuring her supposed loved one gets incredibly hurt AND the father and daughter cannot be with each other after the curse does it's thing. Everything was NOT needed to happen.
The father's behavior has an excuse/reason, her's doesn't. And I doubt the author can magically pull one out of their ass that would justify it all. But I guess we'll see about that. (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

Responses
    FeeFee March 31, 2025 11:44 am

    One woman dumps him, so he turns his emotions off and acts like an ass to Michael... eh, I don't think he has any excuses both mom and dad are trash...

    ReviewRaptor March 31, 2025 12:39 pm
    One woman dumps him, so he turns his emotions off and acts like an ass to Michael... eh, I don't think he has any excuses both mom and dad are trash... FeeFee

    I get what you mean but this is precisely something that happens in real life too (which i think most people are not aware of tbh) and it can incredibly hurt people to the point of emotionally shutting down if it's done in specific ways. So it's not his fault considering this is a form of self-denfense to protect yourself from getting hurt again. He simply doubled down by making it a self-curse.
    Especially anything that happens after since he cursed himself to not be able to feel. We cannot and should not expect him to act like someone with feeling if he factually does not have them anymore.

    The father's behavior is bad or percieved so due to his curse, his mother's is simply her being a nonsensical and selfish cunt instead of being upright about anything. And if she hadn't chosen to emotionally scar her supposed loved one who trusted her, none of his behavior would have happened. ╮( ̄~ ̄)╭

    All in all, bad/negatively percieved behavior does not equal blame in this story. That's something we need to very much differentiate.

    FeeFee April 3, 2025 7:49 pm
    I get what you mean but this is precisely something that happens in real life too (which i think most people are not aware of tbh) and it can incredibly hurt people to the point of emotionally shutting down if ... ReviewRaptor

    Then he is just stupid. I mean if let us say he turns his emotions off he would think logically, right? Then a paternity test would be immediate and the way he finds out she's his daughter after what was it three years because of an allergy and her name. So, his bad behavior is essentially dumb behavior, right? Thanks for opening my eyes.

    ReviewRaptor April 3, 2025 8:12 pm
    Then he is just stupid. I mean if let us say he turns his emotions off he would think logically, right? Then a paternity test would be immediate and the way he finds out she's his daughter after what was it thr... FeeFee

    Not really. He has been betrayed before and I'm not sure a paternity test is so simple in this story. Tho it is an option for sure.
    There's definitely plenty of issues with the writing. It's not like an allergy and her name are a perfect indicator for parenthood per se. Unless those can only possibly exist once. XD

    Pretty sure we could keep picking apart the plot with logic alone. That's why I'm not a fan of the story. It's no fun to find so many issues, especially the not-making-any-sense kind. (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

    FeeFee April 3, 2025 8:35 pm
    Not really. He has been betrayed before and I'm not sure a paternity test is so simple in this story. Tho it is an option for sure.There's definitely plenty of issues with the writing. It's not like an allergy ... ReviewRaptor

    So true, many plot holes.