i read it for the yaoi for the first 11 chapters but then i got annoyed they were teasing my tip about the black room for fuckin 50 chapters so i just finished it i know this isn't supposed to be read as literature but man i who fucking cares i was scrolling through the chapters because the porn at that point was tedious when i just wanted to know why he was controlling the hands and how he had powers but the black haired one didnt which wasnt fucking explained, they introduced useless characters to then be liek "these are actually really bad people man they deserve it" when at the beginning the conflict was so obviously character driven and not trash magic system. All the characters are immature and they still act like they're five years old bro it just sux hard i dont even understand how the fujioshis read this without thinking it's total nutsack man also the writing is shit if half of you can't understand anything going on since the author decided to make up shit as they were going, they die ON THE BED at first but fucking as it's revealed the blonde one didnt actually kill them in their sleep (despite the whole adults being vulnerable when asleep scene) instead dude apparently the hands dragged them from the closet opened the door and popped their heads on the bed dude what y what is the point of this story this is poop also them as children are vastly different from them as adults, as if they swapped fucking roles to fulfill the le scared horny uke protective seme shit yaoi has to do. They couldnt even let the uke be stronger than the fuckin seme bro this is so TRRAAAAASH this nigga writes for a living and somehow he still more swole than the actual athlete i hate this
i read it for the yaoi for the first 11 chapters but then i got annoyed they were teasing my tip about the black room for fuckin 50 chapters so i just finished it
i know this isn't supposed to be read as literature but man i who fucking cares
i was scrolling through the chapters because the porn at that point was tedious when i just wanted to know why he was controlling the hands and how he had powers but the black haired one didnt which wasnt fucking explained, they introduced useless characters to then be liek "these are actually really bad people man they deserve it" when at the beginning the conflict was so obviously character driven and not trash magic system. All the characters are immature and they still act like they're five years old bro it just sux hard i dont even understand how the fujioshis read this without thinking it's total nutsack man
also the writing is shit if half of you can't understand anything going on since the author decided to make up shit as they were going, they die ON THE BED at first but fucking as it's revealed the blonde one didnt actually kill them in their sleep (despite the whole adults being vulnerable when asleep scene) instead dude apparently the hands dragged them from the closet opened the door and popped their heads on the bed dude what y what is the point of this story this is poop
also them as children are vastly different from them as adults, as if they swapped fucking roles to fulfill the le scared horny uke protective seme shit yaoi has to do. They couldnt even let the uke be stronger than the fuckin seme bro this is so TRRAAAAASH this nigga writes for a living and somehow he still more swole than the actual athlete i hate this