
I see you’re really giving it your all, diving deep into these ideas. It’s admirable how committed you are to exploring them, even if they can feel a bit familiar. But no worries, we’re all still following along, curious to see where you’ll go next. And yup, I'd be more than happy to help you build the next chapter of our story. (☞ ° ʖ °)☞

Yeah making it an obvious revenge plot from the start would’ve been the only way to make it readable for me as well. I’m a real sucker for those like in Maria no Danzai or Juujika no Rokunin.
Side note: your thread went straight crazy lol. I had muted the whole thing so I didn’t expect a two-pager of back and forths when I got the notification about your response
filled with rape and genuinely disgusting shit. Idk what psychopath could enjoy watching this cuz int not even horror its clearly sexualized abuse.. fucking creepy. The art is wasted on such a revolting story (-.-)