They lost the plot

Jeetherg March 14, 2025 5:40 am

Wasted potential. The art is good but the plot is all over the place. The plot is not plotting lol.

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    Quishi March 14, 2025 11:47 am

    It’s from a novel and it’s DEFINITELY plotting.. Just have to wait for a bit more..

    RARE°INSIGHTS•やおい◼ March 16, 2025 8:53 am

    It is good author created sexual tension which is good in my opinion it's from novel people who read novel told that real part is about to come after their first sex...

    Quishi March 16, 2025 12:08 pm
    It is good author created sexual tension which is good in my opinion it's from novel people who read novel told that real part is about to come after their first sex... RARE°INSIGHTS•やおい◼

    Exactly, it’s one of the best novels I’ve read so far. I literally had my heart running while reading it! The tension was CRAZYYYY

    miki March 16, 2025 12:58 pm
    Exactly, it’s one of the best novels I’ve read so far. I literally had my heart running while reading it! The tension was CRAZYYYY Quishi

    WHERE do I read it

    June March 20, 2025 11:52 am
    Exactly, it’s one of the best novels I’ve read so far. I literally had my heart running while reading it! The tension was CRAZYYYY Quishi

    Plz plz tell me there's a way to read it online I'm restless trying to find a way to read this novel that got everyone hooked

    PrettyMenSupremacy March 21, 2025 3:55 am
    Plz plz tell me there's a way to read it online I'm restless trying to find a way to read this novel that got everyone hooked June

    https://booktoki468.com/novel/5689481?stx=%EC%9D%B8%ED%88%AC+%EB%8D%94+%EC%93%B0%EB%A6%B4