It's not bad or anything. But it feels like something is lacking. I also can't seem to grasp the MC's character. I can't tell if he's a 'loser' who complains about others online or just an awkward person with self-esteem issues. His personality is kinda all over the place at times. His relationship with the actor also lacks chemistry. I think a few more chapters focusing on their budding relationship would make it better..
It's not bad or anything. But it feels like something is lacking. I also can't seem to grasp the MC's character. I can't tell if he's a 'loser' who complains about others online or just an awkward person with self-esteem issues. His personality is kinda all over the place at times. His relationship with the actor also lacks chemistry. I think a few more chapters focusing on their budding relationship would make it better..