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I feel like he's just bad at reading or properly responding to social cues. Reads as autistic to me, or perhaps some level of social pragmatic communication disorder
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I feel like he's just bad at reading or properly responding to social cues. Reads as autistic to me, or perhaps some level of social pragmatic communication disorder
It's not bad or anything. But it feels like something is lacking. I also can't seem to grasp the MC's character. I can't tell if he's a 'loser' who complains about others online or just an awkward person with self-esteem issues. His personality is kinda all over the place at times. His relationship with the actor also lacks chemistry. I think a few more chapters focusing on their budding relationship would make it better..