This is so good!!!! I was a bit confused by the flow at the near end but maybe because I already wanted to see the end cause the comments intrigued me that I skimmed through to some explanation but the revenge was really worth it.
At the start it doesn't make sense, more like I'm amazed cause bro been in a coma for 10 years but still remember shit even his exam! Bro I can't even remember my exams and that was like 2 weeks ago but yeah this is fiction.
I love how the draw the veins in the face, their expression, movements and everything related to art in this story.
I also love how people came to him, as he build his team and makes new connection. The best thing here is SIWOO!!! BUT IM SO FRUSTRATED CAUSE HE WAS NOT SHOWN THAT MUCH THEY REALLY FOCUSED IN THEIR REVENGE AND THE PLAN FOR IT.
Now for the story, I really appreciate how he really protected siwoo and didn't get involved him too much on his revenge, he kept to himself wild using the people he along the way. Throughout the story, he loses his chance to act like a teenager, to the point that you will forget he's a high schooler, tho he's age is more than that but we really can't count that one as growing up. The build up and the finale was good. The only thing that frustrated me was when he burst out crying at the end, it would have been really great if siwoo and changbeom saw that. I wanted siwoo to be the one he can rely on and cried on, I wanted to let siwoo know that he's best friend is suffering that much and that he's presence was a really good thing for him. For changbeom, I wanted to see him crying like that to melt his heart more cause he's only like a puppy to his goddamn father lol. Maybe if he saw him like that, he'll have to think more about his company and people.
For the side stories, please please let us see them live their life as a normal students, the very thing he wished for, don't just end it with like 1-3 side stories, please make it a bit longer
This is so good!!!! I was a bit confused by the flow at the near end but maybe because I already wanted to see the end cause the comments intrigued me that I skimmed through to some explanation but the revenge was really worth it.
At the start it doesn't make sense, more like I'm amazed cause bro been in a coma for 10 years but still remember shit even his exam! Bro I can't even remember my exams and that was like 2 weeks ago but yeah this is fiction.
I love how the draw the veins in the face, their expression, movements and everything related to art in this story.
I also love how people came to him, as he build his team and makes new connection. The best thing here is SIWOO!!! BUT IM SO FRUSTRATED CAUSE HE WAS NOT SHOWN THAT MUCH THEY REALLY FOCUSED IN THEIR REVENGE AND THE PLAN FOR IT.
Now for the story, I really appreciate how he really protected siwoo and didn't get involved him too much on his revenge, he kept to himself wild using the people he along the way. Throughout the story, he loses his chance to act like a teenager, to the point that you will forget he's a high schooler, tho he's age is more than that but we really can't count that one as growing up. The build up and the finale was good. The only thing that frustrated me was when he burst out crying at the end, it would have been really great if siwoo and changbeom saw that. I wanted siwoo to be the one he can rely on and cried on, I wanted to let siwoo know that he's best friend is suffering that much and that he's presence was a really good thing for him. For changbeom, I wanted to see him crying like that to melt his heart more cause he's only like a puppy to his goddamn father lol. Maybe if he saw him like that, he'll have to think more about his company and people.
For the side stories, please please let us see them live their life as a normal students, the very thing he wished for, don't just end it with like 1-3 side stories, please make it a bit longer