Meanies >:(

HairyDoggo March 13, 2025 4:22 am

All of y'all are ungrateful lil shits who can't enjoy a story that doesn't have a plot you expected it to have. I *liked* his death scene, I found it emotional and intriguing. I *liked* that he returned to his original world instead of staying in the game world because that isn't something you see in this genre very often and because now he actually has the CHOICE between the "real world" and the "game world", making it so he would actually have to sacrifice something of his own volition if he wants to stay there.

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    Bittermelon March 13, 2025 4:33 am

    Pretty sure no one found any problem with the scenes you listed. We don't like how the person that ended up as the ML was the only one who sexually assaulted the MC, or how MC turned dumber and dumber and had to rely on the MLs for everything as the story went on, or how MC showed little to know real affection for Carsen or at least any more than any of the other leads and then suddenly likes him as he's dying ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    tofu March 13, 2025 5:54 am

    Yeahh I don’t think any of that is the problem, it’s the writing and pacing. Things feel rushed and out of nowhere atp

    AXCEL March 13, 2025 7:38 am

    It's not *really* the plot that we have a problem with.

    It's the execution, it's poorly done which makes it even more tragic 'coz the premise and intended outcome (last 2 chapters) are SO interesting and unique it's a shame the build up to it is kinda shit.

    And as readers, we do have a right to voice out our opinions about it, good or bad.

    HairyDoggo March 13, 2025 1:08 pm
    Pretty sure no one found any problem with the scenes you listed. We don't like how the person that ended up as the ML was the only one who sexually assaulted the MC, or how MC turned dumber and dumber and had t... Bittermelon

    I was listing things that people complained about /( ̄∇ ̄)

    HairyDoggo March 13, 2025 1:13 pm
    It's not *really* the plot that we have a problem with.It's the execution, it's poorly done which makes it even more tragic 'coz the premise and intended outcome (last 2 chapters) are SO interesting and unique ... AXCEL

    I'm not saying you're not allowed to voice your opinions about it, I'm saying I'm allowed to voice my opinions, and my opinion is that none of your reasons hold up.

    If you could please explain to me *how* the pacing is bad, that would be appreciated because in my eyes, things were *supposed* to be happening really fast in that scene.

    HairyDoggo March 13, 2025 1:18 pm
    Pretty sure no one found any problem with the scenes you listed. We don't like how the person that ended up as the ML was the only one who sexually assaulted the MC, or how MC turned dumber and dumber and had t... Bittermelon

    But like, I can agree w u on the ml thing, while you could make the case that they shared the most emotional scenes, and that he has the best reason to be in love with the MC because the prince was kinda forced by fate to fall in love, the wolf felt like he needed to pay him back, but the Duke likes him for him, I still think that's dumb! They could've totally showed the MC giving more affection to the ml, at least before that scene, right? And honestly I was kinda hoping that the MC would choose NONE of them and would go work on a career or smthn.