I feel like the author doesn't want to let go of Jaegeng's shitty personality, like, she's having problem in making him develop into someone who has feelings for Dan. (duh) But honestly, I see her try in veeeeeeery subtle moments, like today's chapter where jaegeng expects Dan to kiss him (we can even hear his heartbeats)... I feel like she should make these moments *longer*. If we could see jaejeng yearning for 5+ panels I'd be good enough. Like - make him close his eyes or blush a lil bit for this kiss.
Also, for exemple, the moment where Jaegeng wouldn't stay in the same room as Dan. He firstly didn't want to sleep in the same bed as him because of the last time they spoke and also because he's too attracted to be able to sleep next to him without getting horny and restless. He could sleep this time because he saw how much Dan was in a bad state + needed him to stay. He really didn't fight much to take Dan off... I mean, he's a feather weight and Jaegeng is massive...
When jaegeng and Dan woke up together, it'd be nice to see jaegeng automatically trying to catch Dan's arm to try to not let him go.
Well, I just wish these moments were more evident than the author is making them!
I feel like the author doesn't want to let go of Jaegeng's shitty personality, like, she's having problem in making him develop into someone who has feelings for Dan. (duh) But honestly, I see her try in veeeeeeery subtle moments, like today's chapter where jaegeng expects Dan to kiss him (we can even hear his heartbeats)... I feel like she should make these moments *longer*. If we could see jaejeng yearning for 5+ panels I'd be good enough. Like - make him close his eyes or blush a lil bit for this kiss.
Also, for exemple, the moment where Jaegeng wouldn't stay in the same room as Dan. He firstly didn't want to sleep in the same bed as him because of the last time they spoke and also because he's too attracted to be able to sleep next to him without getting horny and restless. He could sleep this time because he saw how much Dan was in a bad state + needed him to stay. He really didn't fight much to take Dan off... I mean, he's a feather weight and Jaegeng is massive...
When jaegeng and Dan woke up together, it'd be nice to see jaegeng automatically trying to catch Dan's arm to try to not let him go.
Well, I just wish these moments were more evident than the author is making them!