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The numbers don't make any sense. She's either 19 18 or 17 based on the age system used as 9 years yave passed since the beginning. Ialso don't like that MC has no propperly established relationships with anyone. We're just supposed to believe in it based on a few sentences here and there ... so far it's a mess and not well crafted at all
Wait fiestas she says that in 2 years the og novel should start.. then it skips 8 years and she says she don't know when the og novel is gonna snart.. should it not have been going on for 6 years?
Anyway. Pretty good ao far hut like others have said. Kinda wanted a bit more childhood.