After rereading the story I can say it’s good. I like it. Still the Mc is too much of a pushover. Because of his past trauma he tries to be liked by other people but it’s still really annoying. It didn’t even make sense that everyone around him fell in love with him just because he was nice to them. I don’t know…. The story is really good but just too exaggerated with everything going around the Mc.
After rereading the story I can say it’s good. I like it. Still the Mc is too much of a pushover. Because of his past trauma he tries to be liked by other people but it’s still really annoying.
It didn’t even make sense that everyone around him fell in love with him just because he was nice to them. I don’t know…. The story is really good but just too exaggerated with everything going around the Mc.