meh it was alright

Not gonna lie, I didn’t hate this story by I didn’t like it either. I felt that the characters were REALLLY flat. Like no personality at all. I mean yes The coach has something going for him in the beginning. I like how they made him in love with the friend and how that led to the main relationship. But like after they went on those dates I felt like they washed out his personality. And just made him give in to the top. I mean like they didn’t give us a clear reason why he started to like the top besides “he’s nice to me.” which is so bland imo. I just got really bored around chapt 35 because nothing was really progressing the story, it was just them banging and then talking and then banging again. Which there’s nothing wrong with smut here and there but when the characters are one dimensional it doesn’t make it entertaining. I skimmed the last few chapters and least to say it was rushed. I mean they got married after knowing each other for only like a year which is insane tbh. Overall this story was just really boring & flat to me, the characters were hardly memorable and the storyline fizzled out into the generic “my old crush came back and he’s a bad guy oh no”. Not bad but not amazing either, I did like the art though, the character designs were very captivating