One last thing. The sister.

Octavia34 March 10, 2025 6:15 pm

The sister is the clearest sign of poor/lazy writing btw. She's a trope I can't stand, and that is a character whose sole purpose is exposition. Literally the entire point of her character is to tell the MC about the MLs past and move the plot along because the author can't build a good story to save their life.

Literally the only time she appears is to info dump about the ML, and then she disappears. Literally doesn't say a single word outside of her info dumps. Be a better writer, stop using characters just to info dump.

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