this kind of story definitely needs more chapters… pacing was way too fast!! the big fight between the two literally lasted 7 panels before they made up the constant flip flopping between extreme emotions gave me whiplash. both of the characters have a lot of baggage and insecurities that just cant be resolved properly/satisfactorily in these10 chapters. i think it shouldve focused more on the comedic bdsm aspect with the seme being thrown into the scene so suddenly
this kind of story definitely needs more chapters… pacing was way too fast!! the big fight between the two literally lasted 7 panels before they made up the constant flip flopping between extreme emotions gave me whiplash. both of the characters have a lot of baggage and insecurities that just cant be resolved properly/satisfactorily in these10 chapters. i think it shouldve focused more on the comedic bdsm aspect with the seme being thrown into the scene so suddenly