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True! I got really frustrated because I was real worried for ibelin, I wish they showed her redemption arc..
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True! I got really frustrated because I was real worried for ibelin, I wish they showed her redemption arc..
I’ve heard great things about this story so i decided to give it a go but wow.. there were just so many things that left me unfulfilled.
1. The relationship between Arwin and Latte went from 0 to 100 really fast? I just wish they would have showed them dating and falling in love more.
2. What on earth was that ending with Ibelin? She’s pregnant and the consort? So random to just throw in her ending like that when it’s obvious she would not be okay with sharing her husbands love.
3. What happened to the princess? We don’t see her wrap up and I would have actually found it really beautiful for her to end up with Kenneth as a way to go against the original storyline.
4. Those side stories were so bizarre and just kept going one after the other