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Yeah no kidding. I don’t like when they drag it out to much, but they skipped though ten years in 10 chapters.
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Yeah no kidding. I don’t like when they drag it out to much, but they skipped though ten years in 10 chapters.
I really enjoyed it for the most part but the pace is way to quick. There is no time to develop plot points and expand the story around them. They just introduce a plot point and then move on. I kept thinking okay cool now tell me more but the story was like yeah cool right now look over here.