I'm at chapter 20 now and I have to say that the back and forth between the past happenings and current times is really annoyingly done. It's fine doing that once in a while, but this is a bit much and it's not even info we truly NEEDED multiple chapters for. That's what flashbacks are for.
The story is decent so far but the jumbled writing is a bit meh. :/
I'm at chapter 20 now and I have to say that the back and forth between the past happenings and current times is really annoyingly done.
It's fine doing that once in a while, but this is a bit much and it's not even info we truly NEEDED multiple chapters for. That's what flashbacks are for.
The story is decent so far but the jumbled writing is a bit meh. :/