This is so cute, but sometimes it feels like they drift away from the main point, for exam...

your nanny March 6, 2025 12:30 am

This is so cute, but sometimes it feels like they drift away from the main point, for example, the angel guy

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    SilentStorm March 6, 2025 1:12 am

    But he is in the cover tho...

    your nanny March 6, 2025 1:29 am
    But he is in the cover tho... SilentStorm

    I meant that they started with Potts being the only mc, but now they are focusing on the supposed side characters...

    nanassi March 6, 2025 3:16 am
    I meant that they started with Potts being the only mc, but now they are focusing on the supposed side characters... your nanny

    that's literally how most mangas with actual plots and world building go though...

    AA hon March 7, 2025 3:37 am
    that's literally how most mangas with actual plots and world building go though... nanassi

    Not just mangas any literally any book

    Coco March 8, 2025 4:42 am

    Well tbf with you, the angel's story was a bit detached from the rest. The detail of his story could have been told after he showed up more in the main plot for sure. And by the time the readers would be very curious about him. But it's not too off bc they added honey's story with him. Well it could have been more focused on honey's past instead then.

    Or maybe it's supposed to be an extra side story like in some series, like chapter x.5 or something. Anyway I agree that it's a bit out of place/stand out.

    your nanny March 10, 2025 1:43 am
    Well tbf with you, the angel's story was a bit detached from the rest. The detail of his story could have been told after he showed up more in the main plot for sure. And by the time the readers would be very c... Coco

    Thanks, I dramatized a bit too much in my og comment

    Coco March 11, 2025 2:11 pm
    Thanks, I dramatized a bit too much in my og comment your nanny

    You didnt sound dramatic at all. It's really valid observation
    This story is really good that the only thing to criticize is that