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Don't worry, it's just that it's cliché and some people don't like that cliché but that doesn't mean it's bad, I personally like this story a lot. It's like criticizing a fairy tale just for being too sweet or repetitive.
The set up and dialogue is pretty bad, but i still like the story tho
Regardless of how cliche it is, I also quite liked the story!
What's with all this comments T-T
I just want to read the next chapter asap
And yall here are saying this is cringe and all like :-:
Have I grown numb to the cringe to the point I don't see it anymore? ToT
Yes sure it could've been better but idk I'm fine with it as long as mc lives somehow or idk anything positive I shall take anything T-T