The idea was okay but the execution not so much..... First things first, the plot was all over the place especially for a manhwa this short. Also the pacing was horrible, jumping from one thing to another without much of context (e.g. communication, characters' inner thoughts, self reflection, conflicts and dynamics etc.). In my opinion the chemistry suffers greatly when we basically jump from a smut scene to another smut scene without much room for actual character growth and relationship development. For example their first time was quite brutal, but it's essentially just swept under a rug because the ml is in love with the mc so these things are just instantly forgiven smh
The idea was okay but the execution not so much..... First things first, the plot was all over the place especially for a manhwa this short. Also the pacing was horrible, jumping from one thing to another without much of context (e.g. communication, characters' inner thoughts, self reflection, conflicts and dynamics etc.). In my opinion the chemistry suffers greatly when we basically jump from a smut scene to another smut scene without much room for actual character growth and relationship development. For example their first time was quite brutal, but it's essentially just swept under a rug because the ml is in love with the mc so these things are just instantly forgiven smh