way too convoluted

ari (hkv+rtrn>>>>) March 2, 2025 10:08 am

this honestly felt really promising at the start but the author is just trying to do too much and it's just not working. like it had a simple but interesting premise before but now it's just convoluted rather than complex, which is probably what they were aiming for. also the characters do not communicate at all, it's lwk just a hot confusing mess

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    ari (hkv+rtrn>>>>) March 2, 2025 10:09 am

    also uke's hair cut is mad ugly give him the old hair back pls he used to be so pretty lol